Simonb Thank you! The original song is too slow for me, I'm unable to listen to it, so I definitely picked a faster tempo but I think I inherently messed something up!
ShiroKuro Thank you so much!
plop_symphony Thanks! Good point in needing to learn/sing the song to really gell things with this piece.
Sophia Thank you and your comments are extremely insightful to me. I need to figure out this timing thing better for sure, it's the trickiest aspect for me, and nothing really comes that easy. I like how you describe this as breath or pregnant pause, as I can definitely visualize that while playing.
WieWaldi Thanks so much! Neither the trill I play in the beginning nor the one at the end is present in the original sheet music.
I'm happy we made it to Recital #5 too! Btw, that rainbow text is a nice touch! I'm not even sure how you do that so effortlessly! ๐
rsl12 Thanks! I was trying to do S-L-S, going against Alfred's suggestion of L-S-L, just to make it my own personal variation, but my sense of timing needs work for sure.