Rubens So the way you marked the score in the first post was incorrect.
Great, this is exactly what I need to know!! So for that inner voice line, all the notes in the “Gb F Eb Db” part come one 16th note beat earlier than I have them drawn in with those red lines, right?
IOW, the treble Db lines up with the first Ab in the bass, is that right? Then the first Gb in the treble comes in between the first two bass clef Ab notes; the treble Eb comes before the bass Gb, the treble Db lines up with the bass Db? So far, so good?
Then, the Ab in the treble lines up with the fourth Ab in the bass (the one that doesn't get played), and the last group of three notes in the inner line (Db Eb F) come after the fourth beat in the measure (IOW, after the last bass Ab that doesn't actually get played).
Is that right?