hebele I second Sophia's opinion: It is a vast improvement. Congrats to make some swing in such a short time. I know it is hard to unlearn bad habits and replace them with good ones.
Unfortunately, your journey to swing isn't complete yet. I think in general, you swung the 2 + 2ยฝ and the 4 + 4ยฝ notes quite well. Those were the notes when your LH plays two 8ths notes in swing. But when your LH plays only the quarter note (without swinging, of course), your RH has sometimes (not always) trouble to swing alone. I don't remember you had the same problem with the very first LH you learned. The so-called Humpty Dumpty LH, the one that is swinging all the time.
The spots Sophia pointed out, are not the only one, but the most obvious ones. Nevertheless, it is a huge improvement. You are on the right way. ๐
I don't know, if it makes sense to work further on it, or just go to the next lesson and learn it correct from the start. If Christian is talking too much for you, just listen to Sophia's recording and try to copy her rhythm.
btw: Lesson 7 is played straight ๐