First round of comments... I'll have to come back later in the day to hear more because this is a great recital so far!
iternabe This is fantastic! I'm not a big Bach guy, but I can hear your work with articulation of the voices. You are correct about 2x through is not 2x difficult, it's 10x. I'm very impressed that you are tackling a piece this long with only two years of learning. It requires a lot of focus. Good legato, too, when the hands aren't shifting. Bravo!
Sophia Same as my comment to iternabe, I am impressed that you are taking on a piece this long. At two years I could barely hold it together for a 1:00-1:30 piece. As for musicality, one suggestion might be a lighter left hand. Sometimes those chords can overpower the melody. But you kept good tempo, clearly practiced well, and it sounds good!
Nightowl I think it's a good idea to play a simpler arrangement until you can do justice to the full arrangement. Some people (cough me cough) try to dive head first into something beyond their depth. One suggestion for improvement, I think it can go even a little slower. Don't be in a hurry with that melody, you can dwell just a bit. Nicely done.
Peyton Love it! Nice blues groove, especially good left hand work on the piano. I wish I could play a bass line like that! Chord pops sound real nice as well. Perfect amount of accompaniment to the voice. Clever lyrics, too.
keff Hearing this song makes me think of jazz band in high school. My sax friends used to love playing it (note that is sax with an 'a'!) Really nice job hitting all the notes and dealing with the tricky rhythms. Not sure if you're planning to speed it up, but if you are, you've built a solid foundation. Slow is smooth, smooth is fast.
rogerch Your improvisations are most inspiring. It's especially impressive that you can tell a story in real time over the course of the piece. It does feel like there are distinctive "chapters" but they fit together. Have you always improvised, or did you learn a lot of repertoire first and then begin composing? Do you listen to a lot of contemporary classical to get inspiration?
Player1 Great work overcoming the tremor! The pauses are not unduly long that they disrupt the listening experience. I do love this song. It's so simple in concept but it sounds so lovely.